The pie charts below show the percentage of time working adults spent on different activities in a particular country in 1958 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevan
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The two charts provide data on the proportion of various activities done by grown-up people with
work
in one country in two different years.
It is clear that
work
is the key activity
for adults. The figure increased significantly from 33 per cent
in 1958 to 42 per cent
in 2008. The percentage of sleeping as a popular activity
accounted for almost one-third of the total in the fisrt
year but reduced marginally to one-fourth in the second year.
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first
further
, chilling out with friends lost its popularity. This
activity
made up approximately 20 per cent
of the total in 1958, however
the figure dipped significantly during half of the century, to 6 per Add a comma
,however
cent
. The share of travelling to work
grew remarkably from 2 per cent
in the first year to 8 per cent
in 2008.
Overall
, people from both time periods are keen on work
and devote to it the majority of their time. Sleeping is also
popular as an activity
among adults, while
other activities like hobbies are not in demand.Submitted by mgshetler on
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