Some people think that goverment is wasting money on arts and thag money could better spent else where to what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some of them are of the opinion that the government is spending more money than needed on

art

and

this

has become a serious issue of argument lately. In my opinion, it is necessary that

funds

should be allocated towards

art

in order to preserve the cultural heritage of the country and encourage young and creative artists but in a reasonable manner rather than splurging. Every Country spends

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amount of

funds

on

art

in order to improve or develop or preserve

their

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rich heritage. By

alloting

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allowing

allocating

funds

on

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art

this

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could help in encouraging and

accelerate

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the number of visitors/tourists which could eventually generate revenue.

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, Europe has lovely museums which exhibit the work of famous artists which is a spectacular sighting

also

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the architecture. Today we know how many

tourist

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will not miss their visit to these museums,

palace

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and

church

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while

in Europe.  In consideration of several developing countries where basic

necessties

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necessities

are not met, it becomes difficult to allot resources on

art

where people are dying of hunger and medical needs.

However

, importance should be given to

art

whereas

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, we pass on our heritage to the forthcoming generation and continue to carry forward our history and

also

encourage creative minds

for

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their

contribution

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.

Overall

, the Government should not waste money or allocate

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excess which could be used on the people of the country in order to enable them

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better

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quality of life. The

funds

allocated towards

art

should be put

into

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good use which could help generate

certain

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amount of revenue which could sustain itself without any

further

need to get more

funds

.