#task2: Many animal species are becoming extinct as a result of human activities. What are the causes and possible solutions to this problem?

It is considered

some

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, more and more animal

species

are becoming rare in recent years

as a result

of human activities. In

this

essay, there are several absolute causes behind

this

development

, but enough alternatives could be taken to deal with the problem. Regarding these causes, there are mainly two serious factors which are urging

this

development

to appear. The most important reason is the increasing population.

As a result

of

this

, the

number

of forests ( basically trees) is cut a lot, because, people believe that if they cut

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of lot trees, they could have areas in order to construct living accommodations.

Although

the complaints of people who want to save nature, they continue to cut down trees.

As a result

of

this

,

the

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number

of rare

species

are

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becoming extinct. It will cause some drawbacks in future.

This

means that the next generation could not know any information or see rare animals.

Furthermore

, the role of black markets could be the second cause of

this

development

.

In other words

, poachers do everything whatever they want in wildlife,

for example

, they kill a huge

number

of

species

in order to get some money.

Although

the above-mentioned problems are enough, several initiatives can be identified to tackle

this

problematic situation. Protections must be put in place to stop poachers from doing what they are doing.

In other words

, barriers ought to be constructed by the government and the government have to work effectively at the same time.

Furthermore

, the huge

number

of nature savers have to be replaced by employers who are truly loyal. Constructing zoos with huge open spaces would be a second possible solution to

this

development

. Because of

this

, people who work in zoo care more compared to other areas to save animals,

for example

, the zoo's animals feed approximately 4 or 5 times a day and the most important thing is that they could have their own habitat.

To conclude

, a

number

of factors are playing a vital role in decreasing the

number

of rare

species

.

However

, effective strategies are available to change

this

case into a positive side.