The line graph illustrates three different kind of crimes that occurred in Newport city centre between 2003 and 2012.

The line graph illustrates three different kind of crimes that occurred in Newport city centre between 2003 and 2012.
The given line graph gives data about the
crimes
that occurred in
newport
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Newport
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city
center
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centre
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from 2003 to 2012.There are three different
kind
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kinds
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of
crimes
.They are
the
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burglary
,
the
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car
theft
and
the
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robbery. Looking at the graph as a whole,
burglary
and
car
theft
was
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dicrease
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decrease
decreased
between 2003 and 2012
while
robbery remained
all
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the
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most constant. In detail,in 2003
higest
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highest
rate of
crimes
was done is
burglary
which is 3500 and the lowest crime was done is
burglary
.After that
buragrlary
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burglary
keeps on decreasing and in 2008 it was move up and down slightly.Robbery remained
all
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the
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most constant at about 600 incidents
this
pirod
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period
.
Car
theft
was
no
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not
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change
frome
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from
2003 and 2005 but in 2005 an decreased large.After that
car
theft
moved up and down steadily.In 2010
car
theft
over
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the
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2500,
then
fell steadily.As you can see,the number of three
diiferent
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different
kind
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kinds
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of
crimes
reached a peak of about 3600 in 2004.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 77%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words crimes, burglary, car, theft with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "move" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • recorded
  • trends
  • criminal activity
  • categories
  • theft
  • assault
  • vandalism
  • graph
  • x-axis
  • y-axis
  • number of crimes
  • visual representation
  • changes
  • crime rates
  • fluctuating pattern
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