The line graph illustrates three different kind of crimes that occurred in Newport city centre between 2003 and 2012.
The given line graph gives data about the
crimes
that occurred in newport
city Change the capitalization
Newport
center
from 2003 to 2012.There are three different Change the spelling
centre
kind
of Change to a plural noun
kinds
crimes
.They are the
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apply
burglary
,the
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apply
car
theft
and the
robbery.
Looking at the graph as a whole,Correct article usage
apply
burglary
and car
theft
was
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apply
dicrease
between 2003 and 2012 Correct your spelling
decrease
decreased
while
robbery remained all
most constant.
In detail,in 2003 Correct determiner usage
the
higest
rate of Correct your spelling
highest
crimes
was done is burglary
which is 3500 and the lowest crime was done is burglary
.After that buragrlary
keeps on decreasing and in 2008 it was move up and down slightly.Robbery remained Correct your spelling
burglary
all
most constant at about 600 incidents Correct determiner usage
the
this
pirod
.Correct your spelling
period
Car
theft
was no
change Correct your spelling
not
frome
2003 and 2005 but in 2005 an decreased large.After that Correct your spelling
from
car
theft
moved up and down steadily.In 2010 car
theft
over
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of over
the
2500,Change the article
apply
then
fell steadily.As you can see,the number of three diiferent
Correct your spelling
different
kind
of Change to a plural noun
kinds
crimes
reached a peak of about 3600 in 2004.Submitted by hatsudaya706 on
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