With improvements in today's health care, society has to care for more and more elderly people. Do you feel that society will be able to cope with increase in number of elderly people today and how can it be managed? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In
this
contemporary epoch,with the advancement of technology medical services
has
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been notably improved.
Thus
,
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the health
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health
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healthcare
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care
sector has been providing
health
checkup
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checkups
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and
care
to senior citizens of
the
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society
.In my opinion,
community
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the community
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can provide services to the elders with help of civilians
of
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country
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.In
this
essay,I will elaborate
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view.
To begin
with, by the
time
migration has become vital from
rular
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rural
and
subrub
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suburban
areas to urban areas.
According to
recent research,
prime
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reason behind relocation is good quality medical service and higher work
oppertunities
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opportunities
.
Additionally
,in
mega cities
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,
such
as
,
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Ahemdabad
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Ahmedabad
,
banglore
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Bangalore
and Mumbai, Medical colleges
has
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started allocating job for bachelor students,who
has
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just completed their MBBS degree.
Therefore
,elder
people
prefer that medical
check
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regularly
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are regularly
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done by young doctors.To cite an example,in India during covid
pandamic
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pandemic
,when the whole world was in turmoil,at that
time
everyone had to stay indoors to be safe from
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virus covid -19.
Hence
,
government
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has
ampled
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ample
sampled
seats vacant for doctors ,who have to take
care
of
people
above
age
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the age
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of 50 years.
This
is not only beneficial for
people
who can not afford
fees
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the fees
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of doctors,but
also
by receiving quality services on
time
they can live fruitfully.
Apart from
this
,it has been said that what we do comes around us in anyways.Henceforth,
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people
tend to give
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a donation
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donation
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donations
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at
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least 10% of their income to
the
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charity and old age homes.Where
aged
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the aged
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population can be treated effectively.
For instance
,in Canada,Michel Jones one of the famous
celebrity
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of Hollywood has opened
numbers
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number
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of nursing homes,in which registered nurses work
voluntaryly
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voluntarily
to assist retired
people
to take medicines on
time
.
Moreover
,there are some
volunteers
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works,
such
as
,
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recreation therapist, speech therapist and physiotherapist,which helps them
according to
their needs for betterment.And
that
is make
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their retirement age more enjoyable,
Subsequently
,
fund raising
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fundraising
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for taking
care
of
elder
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an elder
the elder
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population of
society
by
health
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the health
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sector will
also
be beneficial.
To conclude
,it is
undeniable
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the undeniable
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conviction that
greater
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a greater
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section of senior citizens has being treated by medical
care
units.
Furthermore
,with the support of
government
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the government
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and
population
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the population
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of
society
,a paradigm shift can be seen in
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the health
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health
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healthcare
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care
sector,which will be
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situation for
the
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society
across the globe.
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