The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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A glance at a line graph provided reveals the breakdown of

visitors

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to the Caribbean island, measured in

million

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, from 2010 to 2017.

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, there was a progressive growth pattern witnessed in total which had a positive relation in comparison to

visitors

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staying on cruise ships and on the island. In terms of total, total experienced 2.5 - a fold increase compared to itself from 2010 to 2014 before it increase steadily to approximately 2,6

million

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in 2015 it was no response detecting any rises and falls between 2015 and 2016, and after

that

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the total had an exponential growth to 3,5

million

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in 2017, which was

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its peak. With regard to

visitors

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on cruise, it was unchanged in two periods the first between 2010 and 2011 and the second from 2013 to 2014, the number of

visitors

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was 1

million

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in 2011 and gradually went up to 1,5

million

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in 2013, between 2015 and 2016 witnessed a slight deterioration to 1,3

million

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before it returned its glory at 1,5

million

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. With respect to the number of tourists staying on the island, its trend experienced a constant

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from 2010 to 2012 before it had a consistent climb to 2

million

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, which was

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its top.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words visitors, million with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

207 words

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