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The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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A glance at a line graph provided reveals the breakdown of
visitors
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 to the Caribbean island, measured in
million
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, from 2010 to 2017.
Overall
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, there was a progressive growth pattern witnessed in total which had a positive relation in comparison to
visitors
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 staying on cruise ships and on the island. In terms of total, total experienced 2.5 - a fold increase compared to itself from 2010 to 2014 before it increase steadily to approximately 2,6
million
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 in 2015 it was no response detecting any rises and falls between 2015 and 2016, and after
that
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 the total had an exponential growth to 3,5
million
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 in 2017, which was
also
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 its peak. With regard to
visitors
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 on cruise, it was unchanged in two periods the first between 2010 and 2011 and the second from 2013 to 2014, the number of
visitors
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 was 1
million
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 in 2011 and gradually went up to 1,5
million
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 in 2013, between 2015 and 2016 witnessed a slight deterioration to 1,3
million
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 before it returned its glory at 1,5
million
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. With respect to the number of tourists staying on the island, its trend experienced a constant
erratic
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 from 2010 to 2012 before it had a consistent climb to 2
million
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, which was
also
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 its top.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words visitors, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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