Some think the current generation should take steps to protect the environment for the next generation.to what extend do you agree or dis agree.

Environmental threats are undeniable for the upcoming
generation
. Few individuals find the present
world
to be responsible
to secure
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the
environment
for the
future
world
. I fully agree
to
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the notion and
this
essay will discuss the logical reasons for my agreement, followed by a brief conclusion.
Firstly
, present environmental concerns will become severe issues for the upcoming humanity.
This
means,
if
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the
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issues like global warming are not dealt with by the current
generation
it will gradually result in unbearable
variation
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variations
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in the temperature across the
world
.
Also
, the upcoming
generation
will have no fresh air to breathe if no appropriate steps are taken to control the escalating pollution level.
Consequently
, the life span in the
future
will shorten
due to
severe respiratory diseases.
For example
, scientists have predicted that the number of deaths
due to
asthma will spike up to 35% by the year 2035.
Hence
, immediate actions are required.
Secondly
,
deforestation
must
also
be dealt with by the current
generation
to secure the
environment
for the upcoming population.
This
is because the adverse effects of a steep incline in
deforestation
in today's time are already being suffered by the present
environment
.
For instance
, unpredictably heavy rainfall, unexpected flooding, soil erosion, drought and many more.
Hence
, the upcoming
generation
will suffer even more severe consequences if the pattern of
deforestation
remains the same.
Therefore
, steps to resolve
this
issue are indeed required to make the
future
world
livable. In conclusion, It is certainly our responsibility to take the
initiate
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in restoring the earth's atmosphere and
environment
to minimize environmental threats like
deforestation
, pollution and, global warming so our
future
generation
can live a happy and healthy life.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • environmental conservation
  • sustainable practices
  • carbon footprint
  • renewable energy
  • deforestation
  • pollution
  • climate change
  • ecosystem
  • biodiversity
  • waste management
  • conservation
  • global warming
  • greenhouse gases
  • natural resources
  • renewable resources
  • fossil fuels
  • reducing emissions
  • eco-friendly
  • recycling
  • alternative energy
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