Fewer citizens go to their local museums and galleries than ever before. What are the causes of this? What can be done about this?
Nowadays the number of citizens who intended to go to local
museums
and galleries
are
decreasing. There are two main reasons why Correct subject-verb agreement
is
this
could happen which I will discuss below as well as
the solutions regarding this
issue.
One of the first problems of the lesser people going to the buildings were
Correct subject-verb agreement
was
due to
the
motivation. Correct article usage
apply
Fix the agreement mistake
Public
Publics
particularly the young generation is now less passionate and motivated Correct article usage
The publics
in
learning history. Change preposition
to
For instance
in Indonesia, students usually perceived that history-related lessons are not interesting which led to their lack curiosity
about historical things including Change preposition
of curiosity
museums
and galleries
. The second reason, it
seems that it is Correct pronoun usage
apply
due to
the perception of the less importance of arts or history in nowdays-life. Some young generations are more concerned in
future-beneficial subjects Change preposition
with
such
as business and technology. Another problem that needs to be considered, there is a
view that historical things and arts had been provided through Correct article usage
the
Internet
. Add an article
the Internet
In other words
, those who have the internet
can access historical subjects without visiting directly to Correct your spelling
Internet
galleries
or museums
.
Although
the motivation to go to that places was more declined, there are several possible solutions to this
problem. First,
visiting historical places and art shows could be made a school programme, which thus
could encourage the young generation to be more aware of that. Secondly
, an improvement of museums
and galleries
which include modern stuff such
as infiltrating video games related to museum’ stuff would be more interesting to the youngsters.
In summary, there are several causes affecting a fewer publics’
intention starting from Change noun form
publics
lack
of interest in studying history and arts, the perceived less importance of the subjects to the technological issues. Correct article usage
a lack
However
, this
issue could be done by promoting them in the school system and creating more modern technology in the building and arcade.Submitted by rams212 on
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