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Today people are wasting lots of food. Do you think so? What can be done to reduce the amount of food waste?

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Nowadays, individuals are encountering serious problems,
people
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 are wasting
food
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 knowing it is not good. Some
people
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 believe that we must not do
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, but we continue losing our
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 for only relaxation. There are solutions to change our life to a better lifestyle. There are three main reasons why individuals waste
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.
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, Over the
last
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 time our appetite has risen, despite poor
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 dying from hunger, and we may watch how a group of girls through
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 to each other on social media.
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, humans eat too much innutritious
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 in the evening. It leads to overweighting and spending a lot of ingredients which might cover our hunger.
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, if we ate inherent
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 before we go to bed, we would save money
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 it would be beneficial to our well-being.
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,
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 behave like they are wealthy, showing how they live, their car and what they are eating. Other
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 feel like being kind of
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 and eating a very expensive meal which contains too many carbohydrates. The meal's portion is more than usual
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people
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 can not eat any more, they try to finish it. To decries the amount of eating, we should learn to save
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 and donate to poor countries
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 as African statues. Sometimes, messengers make us boastful
people
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, and humans need to shun being kind of person or get rid of the audience. There is another solution, we should make a habit of eating healthy
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 to avoid becoming fat, and we eat nutritious
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.
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, individuals need to organize snacks between lunch and dinner. By the way, they eat less than usual. In conclusion, the reasons behind the rise in wasting
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 include bragging and eating too much before going to bed, and possible solutions are eating less at nighttime, being generous and donating to undeveloped countries.
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