Some people think that in order to solve traffic and transportation problems, people should be encouraged to live in cities rather than in suburbs or in the country side. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some individuals are of the belief that a good remedy for solving

traffic

jams and transportation deteriorates is moving from country sides to big

cities

, a viewpoint with which I entirely disagree for a

number

of important rationals.

To begin

with, I believe that despite the importance of

this

problem in today's nations with the booming crowd and raising the

number

of cars every second there are not any practical long-term solutions.

Firstly

there should be a close investigation into the main cause of

traffic

jams in any area and after

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it is logical to offer proper clues for each zone per case.

Secondly

, I am personally of the belief that the increasing

number

of cars, car collisions

as well as

substandard or insufficient roads are the main existing reasons for transportation

problems

.

Moreover

, there are a

number

of solutions for current

traffic

problems

which are working properly in some

cities

.

For

instance

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improving transport systems and developing the

number

or quality of roads

as well as

the culture of driving

such

as providing carpooling facilities can help roads with less load of cars

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in rush hours. In some other

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cities

for example

New York City there is a developed system of the subway which is very handful for

this

headache. In conclusion,

while

some might argue that moving to

cities

for a living could be a good solution for

traffic

problems

since there are better road and controlling systems in these areas. In my opinion,

however

,

this

idea is rather grounded in mentioned

problems

in urban

traffic

.