The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity.
The given diagram illustrates how geothermal is to generates electricity.
Overall
, it is evident from the diagram that, there are 5 main stages involved in the production of electrical power, which are cold rain being pumped down, injection well stage, production well stage,condenser stage, and ends with electricity produced from a generator.
To begin
, cold rain is pumped down through a 4.5km long injection wall. Then
the cold drink gets to the geothermal zone which is a hot rock. Moreover
the hot rock heat up the cold rain, and subsequently
, the cold drink becomes hot, and the hot drink is then
pumped up through the production which is wider than the injection wall.
Furthermore
, the next step involves a condenser which is used to convert hot water into streams. Then
, the steam power the turbine which is connected to the generator. Finally
, the turbine power the generator to produce electricity which is delivered to various places.Submitted by yeboahsamuellaabban on
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