The graphs shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London

The graphs shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London
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revealsthe
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reveals the
amount of passengers
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Underground Station per hour.
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, it is apparent from the graph given that the amount of users increases in the morning
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to the evening. The work time begins at 6:00 and the number of the first term of users is 100 and it doubles at 7 o'clock.
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, at rush hour the flow of passengers rockets and reaches
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peak, attracting 400. From 8:00 to 10:00the amount of underground users plunges by 230 and indicates approximately 170 which is the lowest point in the morning part.
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, at 11 a.m. , a morginally increase which is intensified at 12 a.m. is registered. Afternoon term begins from 13:00 and experiences about 280 passengers. At 14:00 a remarkable decline is undergone in the rates of London Underground Station fares and it shows the lowest figure at whole graph when it comes to 16 p.m..
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, it witnessed a rapid increase from under a 100 to almost 370. To provide the contrast, the rate demonstrates a downward trend at 20:00 again and the end of the supplied time finishes with the number of approximately 140 fares.
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