There is a good deal of evidence that increasing car use is contributing to global warming and having other undesirable effects on people's health and well-being. What can be done to discourage people from using their cars?

Recently, the issue that has been brought into focus is

people

tend to buy their own

cars

instead

of public transport which leads to the development of global warming and other influences on

people

’s health. Some

people

believe that personal transportation plays a vital role in our modern life. In my opinion, the harmful effects of car

ownership

will be solved as everybody takes action on solutions In

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essay, there are a significant number of solutions that can avoid urban pollution and undesirable consequences

deterioration

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in

people

's health. One thing

that is

of great significance is that governments have to remove a major means by which

people

maintain day-to-day fitness. There are many reasons for adults will be more likely to limit the

use

of their

cars

.

In addition

, they only

use

them when it is certainly necessary and vital. For one thing, governments should impose tolls and set up more toll stations. For another, individuals will find it honestly a huge amount of money that they have to pay. The most familiar example of

this

is in Viet Nam, there is a great

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of toll stations and it leads to increasingly

people

use

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public transportation

instead

of their own

cars

in order to save a fee for other important articles. It seems quite clear that humans should join

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to protect our habitat by limiting car

ownership

, car-free environment will avoid streets with high volumes of traffic and reduce vehicle emissions. It is

also

well-known that governments should encourage

people

to

use

electric

cars

instead

of traditional

cars

. The immediate result it produces is electric

cars

do not emit exhaust fumes, they have the potential to reduce urban pollution. In the same way, electric

cars

have a low maintenance cost; because electric motors have fewer moving parts than petrol-powered engines

so

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they are easier to maintain. A better example of

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can be best

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by the appearance of a good deal of electric

cars

in Viet Nam because of

its

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convenience and it is

a

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good way to save money. It makes no difference that the decreasing of traditional

cars

can lead to

people

's sense of well-being and avoid undesirable consequences

deterioration

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in

people

's health. In summary, it can not be denied that mass car

ownership

have

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a large

amount

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of practical benefits nowadays

such

as flexible and autonomous travel expressing individual taste and identity.

However

, the overload of

cars

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ownership

can lead to serious consequences affecting the greenness of the earth.