There is a good deal of evidence that increasing car use is contributing to global warming and having other undesirable effects on people's health and well-being. What can be done to discourage people from using their cars?

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Recently, the issue that has been brought into focus is
people
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tend to buy their own
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instead
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of public transport which leads to the development of global warming and other influences on
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’s health. Some
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believe that personal transportation plays a vital role in our modern life. In my opinion, the harmful effects of car
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will be solved as everybody takes action on solutions In
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essay, there are a significant number of solutions that can avoid urban pollution and undesirable consequences
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in
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's health. One thing
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of great significance is that governments have to remove a major means by which
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maintain day-to-day fitness. There are many reasons for adults will be more likely to limit the
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of their
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.
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, they only
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them when it is certainly necessary and vital. For one thing, governments should impose tolls and set up more toll stations. For another, individuals will find it honestly a huge amount of money that they have to pay. The most familiar example of
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is in Viet Nam, there is a great
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of toll stations and it leads to increasingly
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use
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public transportation
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of their own
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in order to save a fee for other important articles. It seems quite clear that humans should join
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to protect our habitat by limiting car
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, car-free environment will avoid streets with high volumes of traffic and reduce vehicle emissions. It is
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well-known that governments should encourage
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to
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electric
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instead
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of traditional
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. The immediate result it produces is electric
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do not emit exhaust fumes, they have the potential to reduce urban pollution. In the same way, electric
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have a low maintenance cost; because electric motors have fewer moving parts than petrol-powered engines
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they are easier to maintain. A better example of
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by the appearance of a good deal of electric
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in Viet Nam because of
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convenience and it is
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good way to save money. It makes no difference that the decreasing of traditional
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can lead to
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's sense of well-being and avoid undesirable consequences
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in
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's health. In summary, it can not be denied that mass car
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have
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a large
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of practical benefits nowadays
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as flexible and autonomous travel expressing individual taste and identity.
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, the overload of
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cars
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ownership
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can lead to serious consequences affecting the greenness of the earth.
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