There is a good deal of evidence that increasing car use is contributing to global warming and having other undesirable effects on people's health and well-being. What can be done to discourage people from using their cars?
Recently, the issue that has been brought into focus is
people
tend to buy their own cars
instead
of public transport which leads to the development of global warming and other influences on people
’s health. Some people
believe that personal transportation plays a vital role in our modern life. In my opinion, the harmful effects of car ownership
will be solved as everybody takes action on solutions
In this
essay, there are a significant number of solutions that can avoid urban pollution and undesirable consequences deterioration
in Change preposition
of deterioration
people
's health.
One thing that is
of great significance is that governments have to remove a major means by which people
maintain day-to-day fitness. There are many reasons for adults will be more likely to limit the use
of their cars
. In addition
, they only use
them when it is certainly necessary and vital. For one thing, governments should impose tolls and set up more toll stations. For another, individuals will find it honestly a huge amount of money that they have to pay. The most familiar example of this
is in Viet Nam, there is a great quantity
of toll stations and it leads to increasingly Change the quantifier
number
people
use
public transportation Wrong verb form
using
instead
of their own cars
in order to save a fee for other important articles. It seems quite clear that humans should join hand
to protect our habitat by limiting car Fix the agreement mistake
hands
ownership
, car-free environment will avoid streets with high volumes of traffic and reduce vehicle emissions.
It is also
well-known that governments should encourage people
to use
electric cars
instead
of traditional cars
. The immediate result it produces is electric cars
do not emit exhaust fumes, they have the potential to reduce urban pollution. In the same way, electric cars
have a low maintenance cost; because electric motors have fewer moving parts than petrol-powered engines so
they are easier to maintain. A better example of Correct word choice
and
this
can be best provide
by the appearance of a good deal of electric Change the form of the verb
provided
cars
in Viet Nam because of its
convenience and it is Correct pronoun usage
their
a
good way to save money. It makes no difference that the decreasing of traditional Correct article usage
apply
cars
can lead to people
's sense of well-being and avoid undesirable consequences deterioration
in Change preposition
of deterioration
people
's health.
In summary, it can not be denied that mass car ownership
have
a large Change the verb form
has
amount
of practical benefits nowadays Change the quantifier
number
such
as flexible and autonomous travel expressing individual taste and identity. However
, the overload of cars
Change the noun form
car
ownership
can lead to serious consequences affecting the greenness of the earth.Submitted by sinh.ielts on
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