There is a good deal of evidence that increasing car use is contributing to global warming and having other undesirable effects on people's health and well-being. What can be done to discourage people from using their cars?
Recently, the issue that has been brought into focus is
people
tend to buy their own Use synonyms
cars
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instead
of public transport which leads to the development of global warming and other influences on Linking Words
people
’s health. Some Use synonyms
people
believe that personal transportation plays a vital role in our modern life. In my opinion, the harmful effects of car Use synonyms
ownership
will be solved as everybody takes action on solutions
In Use synonyms
this
essay, there are a significant number of solutions that can avoid urban pollution and undesirable consequences Linking Words
deterioration
in Change preposition
of deterioration
people
's health.
One thing Use synonyms
that is
of great significance is that governments have to remove a major means by which Linking Words
people
maintain day-to-day fitness. There are many reasons for adults will be more likely to limit the Use synonyms
use
of their Use synonyms
cars
. Use synonyms
In addition
, they only Linking Words
use
them when it is certainly necessary and vital. For one thing, governments should impose tolls and set up more toll stations. For another, individuals will find it honestly a huge amount of money that they have to pay. The most familiar example of Use synonyms
this
is in Viet Nam, there is a great Linking Words
quantity
of toll stations and it leads to increasingly Change the quantifier
number
people
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use
public transportation Wrong verb form
using
instead
of their own Linking Words
cars
in order to save a fee for other important articles. It seems quite clear that humans should join Use synonyms
hand
to protect our habitat by limiting car Fix the agreement mistake
hands
ownership
, car-free environment will avoid streets with high volumes of traffic and reduce vehicle emissions.
It is Use synonyms
also
well-known that governments should encourage Linking Words
people
to Use synonyms
use
electric Use synonyms
cars
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instead
of traditional Linking Words
cars
. The immediate result it produces is electric Use synonyms
cars
do not emit exhaust fumes, they have the potential to reduce urban pollution. In the same way, electric Use synonyms
cars
have a low maintenance cost; because electric motors have fewer moving parts than petrol-powered engines Use synonyms
so
they are easier to maintain. A better example of Correct word choice
and
this
can be best Linking Words
provide
by the appearance of a good deal of electric Change the form of the verb
provided
cars
in Viet Nam because of Use synonyms
its
convenience and it is Correct pronoun usage
their
a
good way to save money. It makes no difference that the decreasing of traditional Correct article usage
apply
cars
can lead to Use synonyms
people
's sense of well-being and avoid undesirable consequences Use synonyms
deterioration
in Change preposition
of deterioration
people
's health.
In summary, it can not be denied that mass car Use synonyms
ownership
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have
a large Change the verb form
has
amount
of practical benefits nowadays Change the quantifier
number
such
as flexible and autonomous travel expressing individual taste and identity. Linking Words
However
, the overload of Linking Words
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cars
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car
ownership
can lead to serious consequences affecting the greenness of the earth.Use synonyms
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