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Many parents believe that children should read strict educational books and not any other entertainment books as it is were of time. Do you agree or disagree.

#parents #children #books #entertainment #time
Reading
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a book
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book
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books
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 helps to develop different parts of a
child
's brain. Some
parents
 believe that their
kid
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kids
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 should focus on reading educational books rather than
entertainment
 books to use the
time
 wisely. I highly disagree with
this
 statement and would discuss the disadvantages of
such
 a position in
this
 essay. Nowadays
children
 tend to spend more
time
 on computers and other devices, playing games rather than reading or studying. To educate
children
, some
parents
 believe that their
time
 should be spent on studies rather than
entertainment
 and force
children
 to focus only on educational literature to get good school grades.
However
, I believe, that modern
parents
 stopped reading for pleasure
themselves
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, and only focus on making their
child
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 get good grades in school by focusing strictly on certain subjects to pursue a good career to become a lawyer, doctor or businessman in the future.  In my
opinion
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 the role of every parent is to introduce the world of reading to the
child
 from a very early age by reading them fairy tales. Reading
entertainment
 books can improve a
child
's vocabulary, use of language grammar, and imagination. It is scientifically proven, that those
children
 who were introduced to
entertainment
 reading develop their speaking skills faster
as well as
 their creativity. I believe there should be a good balance between reading for pleasure and education. I
also
 think that
parents
 should spend more
time
 reading novels that might help to reduce stress and boost their creativity.
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