The diagram below shows the process for recycling products

The diagram below shows the process for recycling products
The picture given above shows how household waste can be used again by recycling. There are nine steps that need to be taken to convert the trash into something useful. Even though there are a lot of processes and steps, we won't be doing it all by ourselves. The government will do most of the job. First and foremost, we need to put our waste into trash cans provided by the government.
Then
, a garbage truck will pick it up and deliver it to the recycling centre.
Next,
workers at the centre will sort the garbage into two distinct types because only some can be used. The fourth
step
is to compress all the eligible waste into one giant block so it will be easier to be used for the fifth
step
.
Moreover
, the fifth
step
includes crushing giant blocks into pieces and washing those pieces.
However
, these pieces are still way too big,
therefore
we need to convert them into plastic pellets. In the next
step
, we need to transform the pellets into a form of raw material by heating them.
Finally
, we can create various different new stuff from raw materials.
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