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The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. image/jpeg:48F9FF00-8FE9-4857-8DC4-D7EE12377F8E/F0916A12-4A96-46F5-8D98-FC466E6BCBCD:1150.000000:842.000000

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The map below displays the main changes that have taken place in Ryemouth from 1995 until the present moment.
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, industrial and commercial areas have been removed and replaced by housing areas, and some natural features have been replaced by sports facilities. On the northeast of the map, golf and a tennis resort have taken the place of farmland and a forest park.
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, the car park has been constructed on the right side of the hotel. On the map's southwest, the fishing port was removed, and the fish market and shops were occupied by apartments and restaurants, respectively. In the northwest, more houses have been built. The only buildings which have remained the same are the cafe and the hotel.

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Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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