Some educationalists think that a programme of international exchange visits will offer various benefits for teenage school students. Do you think the advantages of it outweigh the disadvantages?

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Developed
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- these
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have a high level of economic and social
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. Currently, there are about 60 developed
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in the
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, more than 150
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of the
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belong to developing and undeveloped
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. There is a serious problem of the unfair distribution of
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wealth, and
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the standard of living between the developed
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and the rest of the
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. Developed
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, with the
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of the UN and other international organizations, are trying to help other
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in
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development
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assistance
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is not limited to direct monetary
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.
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, the United Nations
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Program (UNDP) is a global network of the United Nations to provide gratuitous and non—politicized
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assistance
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to its Member States. UNDP operates in 177
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and territories and operates in three main areas: sustainable
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, democratic governance and peacebuilding,
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and disaster resilience. The program
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contributes to the effective attraction and use of
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assistance
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. In all its actions, UNDP pays special attention to gender equality and the protection of human rights. From my point of view,
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from developed
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should not be limited only to monetary
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does not reach those who need it. Money is spent for other purposes, stolen, creating
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for corruption.
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in the form of programs in the field of providing the poor population with food, in the field of education and health care, especially for children, will be perhaps more effective.
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the UN, 828 million people faced hunger in 2021. During the pandemic,
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from developed
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in combating
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phenomenon is very important.
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,
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in the
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of
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civil society with equal rights is important.
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is especially true for African
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. The UN Office for Disaster Risk Reduction said that between 2000 and 2019, 7,348 major natural disasters occurred, which killed 1.23 million people, affected 4.2 billion people and cost the global economy about $2.97 trillion.
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,
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in preventing and overcoming the consequences of natural disasters for developing and undeveloped
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is another area in which
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from developed
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is vital. Nowadays, modern information technologies are becoming critically important in all aspects of human life.
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means that developed
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can provide significant
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in the elaboration of technologies for the rest of the
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, because
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will contribute to the
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of the economy, legal and public life, education and health, etc. Summing up, it is important to note that in order to overcome the huge social and economic inequality in the
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, developed
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should actively participate in helping
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and undeveloped
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for the sake of the future of all humanity.
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