You visited a hotel last week and left some items behind. Write a letter to the manager stating 1. Details of your stay 2. How important the items are to you 3. How you would want the items to the sent to you

Dear Sir or Madam, I hope you are well. I am writing

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letter regarding my watch with I left at your hotel. I stayed at the "Golden Hotel" from 01/02/2023 to 05/02/2023 and if I remember correctly it was room number 205 on the second floor. I believe, my item should be in the left drawer just next to the bed. It is a gold watch embellished with vivid diamonds

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, which means a lot to me. My mum gave it to me 3 years ago and I just cannot live without it. I am using it for personal and work purposes, so you probably can imagine how crucial it is for me. If you would find my item, could you please send it by post with first class at the below address: Flat 1 Knowles Wharf 39 St. Pancras Way London. Please let me know your bank details and I will cover all the necessary costs. Look forward to hearing from you. Martyna

Submitted by martynaa.j on Wed Apr 05 2023

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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0Word repetition
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10 paragraphs

165 words

6.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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You visited a hotel last week and left some items behind. Write a letter to the manager stating 1. Details of your stay 2. How important the items are to you 3. How you would want the items to the sent to you

The Closing

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