The diagram below shows how to recycle organic waste to produce garden fertilizer (compost).

The diagram below shows how to recycle organic waste to produce garden fertilizer

(compost).
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The diagram illustrates the steps by which to compost recycled from organic waste in order to produce a natural garden
fertiliser
.
Overall
, there are approximately 5 basic steps in the process of making
fertiliser
at home from recycled organic waste matter, beginning with the preparation of an empty plastic
container
and ending with composted organic garden
fertiliser
. The first stage is to acquire a plastic
container
of approximately 2m³ that has several holes in the sides to allow air to flow in and out of the
container
.
Next,
organic materials
such
as food scraps, grass clippings , and newspaper are layered inside the
container
in approximately 15 cm thick layers. Afterwards, hot water and some form of nitrogen are added to the compost to assist in the composting process which follows. During
this
process, air will flow in and out of the air holes on the sides of the jar. Approximately six months later, the composted material will be ready to be removed from the
container
and used in the garden as
fertiliser
.
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