The maps below show a bookstore in 2000 and now. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and making comparisons where relevant.

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Represented is the map exhibiting the change in the arrangement of some bookshelves in a bookstore since 2000. As transparent from the picture, it can be easily seen that the structure of the store has not changed too much. Actually, there have been more service areas provided for the customers to read

books

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there. At

first

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sight, after we enter the bookstore, we can see that the shelves at the entrance have not changed. Two shelves of travel

books

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and new

books

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are remaining as it was and the service desk at the corner of the entrance is still there as well.

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, in the middle of the bookstore, three bookshelves of three types of

books

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including art , hobbies and category were replaced by three circle tables. Near the service desk, the place where non-fiction

books

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used to stay was changed to a café. These non-fiction types were brought to the left corner where they used to place fiction

books

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. In 2000, fiction

books

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accounted for the biggest area, specifically all the left side of the shop. But now, except for being replaced by non-fiction, its place is

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pulled down and made away for arts, hobbies and categories.

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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 4 times.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

201 words

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