You visited a hotel last week and left some items behind. Write a letter to the manager stating 1. Details of your stay 2. How important the items are to you 3. How you would want the items to the sent to you

Dear Sir, My name is Harry and I am writing

this

letter to inquire about the file which I

have

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left in your hotel during my stay from 10th to 17th of March at Room No 507. For your reference, the booking was made under the name of Harpreet Singh. For your easiness, the file which I have left at your premises is blue in colour and has a sticker by the name of Ydx on it. Since the file has my personal documents like

pancard

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, company id etc. I request you

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keep these items in your possession until these are personally handed over or couriered to me. Since

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I have my meeting due next week, I request you to send these items via post to me urgently.

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, request you to share your account details so that I can reimburse you the postal service cost.If you need any

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information, please feel free to mail or call me. Thanking you in anticipation. Yours sincerely, Harpreet Singh.

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7 paragraphs

168 words

7.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

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Suitable writing tone

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