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you should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Percentage of UK people who consumed daily recommended amount of fruit and vegetable in 2002, 2006 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

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The given three charts
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 information on how different countries spend and consume various
resources
 and the number of people in different parts of the
world
. It can be clearly derived from the graph that even though most of the
resources
 are utilized by USA and Europe, it is merely a fourth of
world's
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population
. Apart from that, it is unclear
on
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what
resources
 people spend most of their income. The first chart shows that most of the money is being spent on unknown factors (40%) other than food, transportation or housing which is 24%, 18% and 12% respectively. Asia is the biggest partaker in the
world
population
 with 57% of
population
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the population
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.
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,
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its
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contribution
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a contribution
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in
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consumption
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the consumption
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 of
resources
 is still unknown. USA and Europe,
on the other
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 contribute equally which is
alomost
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almost
 a quarter, but almost two
third
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thirds
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 of
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their
population
 is exploiting
resources
. Africa,
however
, is merely a tenth of
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the world
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world
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population
 and comes under
the
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40% of other countries using
resources
.
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