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Some people think that newspapers are the best way to learn news . However , others believe that they can learn news better through other media . Discuss both views and give your opinion .

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There are controversial perspectives heating a debate over
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 paper or technology devices will be the sole method to absorb
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 updates .
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 some hold a strong view that it is the only
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 to digest
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 reports , the opposite makes a statement that collecting
news
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 will be better when
people
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 use
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 devices .
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 , reading online
news
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 will make
people
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 feel more comfortable and convenient than reading traditional
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 . Without a shadow of a doubt , accessing new
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 from
newspapers
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 brings many benefits to the knowledge base of
people
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 but it is not the only
way
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 .
Newspapers
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 are considered to be reliable sources of
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 .
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 ,
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 in
newspapers
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 is carefully researched before being released by journalists and
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 must be passed on to the authorities for approval .
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,
people
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 collect
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 from
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 good for human life knowledge but it is not the best
way
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 .
On the other hand
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 , others argue that other multimedia will be a better
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 to capture breaking
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 than printing paper . The convenience of the internet helps
people
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 to update
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 every time , anywhere
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the fastest and free of charge .
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 , most
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 in
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 use smartphones to go to social networking sites
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 as Kenh 14 and VietNam
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.
Besides
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 , it only takes two seconds .
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 ,
people
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 are attracted by the internet’s ability to process
information
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 quickly . In conclusion ,
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 papers are a good source of data , but perhaps multimedia will bring about the advantage of
people
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’s insight .

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Your opinion

Don’t put your opinion unless you are asked to give it.

If the question asks what you think, you MUST give your opinion to get a good score.

Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.

Here are examples of instructions that require you to give your opinion:

...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • news coverage
  • perspectives
  • opinions
  • accessed
  • interactive
  • engaging
  • real-time
  • multimedia
  • combination
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