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Some people believe that eventually all jobs will be done by artificially intelligent robots. What is your opinion?

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As technology continues to advance, the majority of the
jobs
 in future will be done by machines with artificial intelligence.
Robots
 possibly can take most of the
jobs
;
however
, it is highly unlikely that
occupations
 that require human contact can be substituted.
This
 essay will discuss, why most of the
jobs
 will be automated and only a few will be carried out by humans. Automation is becoming increasingly prevalent and is likely to have a significant impact on the labour
jobs
 market that does not require specific and complex human skills. Many companies will turn to artificial intelligence to automate processes and increase efficiency as it is far less expensive than hiring, training and employing a human.
For example
, in many countries car wash stations have been automated that cost far less than employees.
In addition
, these stations work around the clock and require no vacations or holiday pay. For these reasons,
occupations
 that can be automated will be replaced.
Conversely
, there are some
occupations
 that require a human touch and for
this
 ,reason can not be replaced by artificial intelligence. These
jobs
 include education, medicine, psychology and social work to name but a few.
Robots
 will never be able to achieve the social and emotional capabilities that are required to perform these
jobs
.
To conclude
, a significant number of human
jobs
 will be conducted by
robots
 in the future.
While
robots
 can take over the labour market
jobs
 ,
occupations
 that require human skills will always exist. Ultimately, skilful
jobs
 which are effectively done by people may not be done by machines.
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