Today children and adults from many countries play video games. Some people believe playing video games is harmful. To what extent do you agree with this opinion?

As a result
of technological days, people from many countries have wasted important hours of the day playing
video
games
.
Consequently
, several people are concerned about some problems it can develop for both,
kids
and
adults
. I have my opinion about it and will
further
discuss it in
this
essay. In beginning, individuals have been wasting many hours in front of televisions playing
video
games
, and
this
is reflected in several problems for them and their families. To support it, an interview with a reputed paediatrician noticed by CNN shows that pupils` brains are compromised for saving numerals of virtual information and losing real histories.
According to
my studies about the topic, it is impossible to stop the technology growth,
however
, public orientation,
such
as from schools, authorities, and associated parental control would have a massive impact on
kids
'
life
, and it could help them to organize the free and task times.
Moreover
,
video
games
are not impacting only
kids
'
life
, but
also
adults
'
life
, in
this
case, must be important to highlight the impact of financial and family structures which have been getting fail them financially and promoting some divorces.
For
this
reason, an interview made by Couple magazine presented readers increased number of divorces after they started to play
games
after marriage. Even so, it does not happen only because of the time wasted by each one
while
playing
video
games
, but
also
because they lost important amounts of money and jobs as well. It is a reflection of decreasing efforts in their work. In my mind,
adults
must live as
adults
and stop to live like young lovers. In conclusion, both examples,
kids
and
adults
, could be interrupted if there were responsibilities. Obviously, like everything in
life
,
video
games
and technologies are extremely necessary for us,
on the other hand
, society has to control the time to use them.
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