The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of newshops that openedin one county between 2011and 2018.

The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of newshops that openedin one county between 2011and 2018.
The graph illustrates the number of stores that closed and the number of new boutiques that opened in one nation between 2011 and 2018. Generally,
it is clear that
both closed and opened stores experienced some fluctuations throughout the years.
However
, opened
shops
were more than
shops
that were not in use. In 2011 the newly created
shops
stood at almost 9500
while
6300
shops
were not working in the same year.
However
, in 2012 the amount of opened
shops
drop sharply to 4000
whereas
closed
shops
decreased steadily to almost 6000 in 2012.
In contrast
, about 1000 used
shops
were added in 2014
also
, in 2015, opened stores decreased dramatically to 4000
then
remained constant till 2017and
finally
hit a low of 3000 in 2018
On the other hand
, closed space increased steadily to 7000 in 2013
then
again decreased gradually to 6100
shops
in 2014. From there, the number of closed
shops
reaches a trough of. 500
then
plunged sharply to 6000 closed
shops
in 2016 and remained almost the same till 2018.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words shops with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 3 times.
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