The table below shows the figures for imprisonment in five countries between 1930 and 1980. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.
The bar chart presents the figures for confinement in five countries, which are Great Britain, Australia, New Zealand, the United States, and Canada for the period 1930-1980.
The steady increase was in Great Britain, rising from 20,000 prisons in 1930 to 80,000 prisons in 1980.
Moreover
, the greatest increase in convict numbers was in the United States compared with the other four nations. There rapidly rose to almost 140,000 prisoners in 1980 from 95,000 prisoners in 1980.
Whereas
in Australia and New Zealand, the number fell markedly from 1930 to 1940 and then
increased gradually till 1980, except in Australia they decreased by about 30,000 from the 1970 total. On the other hand
, Canada is the only country where the criminal number decreased from 120,00 in 1930 to 90,000 in 1980 and fluctuated in trend more than the others.
Consequently
, the figures for convicts demonstrated that the quick increase in the United States must be a worrying trend.Submitted by giftbro_ on
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