Scientists believe that computers will become more intelligent than human Some find it is a positive trend while others think it is a negative development. Discuss earlier points and give your own opinion!
Nowadays, there are a plethora of computers
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with the notion that it will be positive for our civilization and communities which see that it will be a negative development. In the following paragraphs, Fix the agreement mistake
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this
essay shall elucidate both paradigms and detail why the latest opinion is more relevant than the first notion.
To begin
with, technologies which have autonomous decision-making will assist numerous aspects in
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Consequently
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On the other hand
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As a result
, several phenomena can happen like they might construct their own agenda or for the worst point, they can against us based on a paradigm that our species is a threatnes
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In other words
, it will be a drawback for human existence, that being the case the author sees that it will be a negative development if we never concern on
it.
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To conclude
, machines which have fascinating features to be more intelligent than us have a benefit such
as they can assist us for
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Nevertheless
, our lives can be threated
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