The graph below shows the average number of uk commuters traveling each day by car, bus or train between 1970 and 2030

The graph below shows the average number of uk commuters traveling each day by car, bus or train between 1970 and 2030
The given line graph compares the mode of
transport
the Uk citizens use on a daily basis from 1970 to 2030.
Overall
, it is evident from the graph that, the car was by far the most popular means of
transport
,
while
the number of people using cars and trains increased over the years, people using
bus
numbers declined.  In 1970 the number of crowds who used a car to travel stood at around 5.7
million
which was the highest figure in that year.
Bus
was the second significant means of
transport
as it attracted approximately 4
million
commuters each day. The train was the least significant that year as just 2
million
passengers used it. The numbers of crowds using all the 3 forms of transportation remain static for the next 20 years. Afterwards, individuals who made use of cars numbers grew gradually to complete the period with 9
million
passengers travelling by it each day. The
bus
which was the second most popular travelling mode began to experience a downward trend. Their total dropped steadily to 3
million
in 2030.
However
individuals using trains grew in figure slowly, and
although
there were some fluctuations in their trend, their number overtook the figure of the population using the
bus
in 2020. By 2030 the train was the second vital mode of
transport
, attracting about 5
million
passengers each day.
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