Studying with a group of students in a classroom is more beneficial than learning online at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Despite that a growing number of educational institutions provide online

courses

for a more study schedule, I strongly agree that it is necessary to have offline

courses

based on various benefits for not only young individuals but educators.

To begin

with, remote curriculums could provoke various negative effects, including destruction caused by phones or televisions at home,

moreover

, current technologies could not provide a stable internet connection during

courses

, which will downgrade the academic performance of students.

For example

, many schools in Taiwan were forced to give lectures on the Internet during the pandemic, which lead to a downward trend in scores,

along with

it, the shortage of practical experiences.

On the other hand

, there are many advantages regarding studying on campuses, which not only help youth gain skills of communication and cooperation by conducting group works with peers in classrooms, but allow teachers to keep an eye on students to ensure their safety on campuses

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while

assisting them with the acquisition of knowledge.

For example

, school activities

such

as school clubs and group discussions provide opportunities for young people to make friends with people having different backgrounds, which could demolish the prejudizes based on

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diversity.

To conclude

, it is inevitable that online

courses

will gain popularity based on their convenience and low costs, compared to traditional education.

However

, the value of offline

courses

should not be overlooked, since it provides a safe environment for our descendants to gain essential social capacities,

not to mention

, teaching in classes could ensure the quality of education without disturbing caused by technical issues.