Advertising influence people to buy things such as clothes and shoes. What are the problems caused by that? What solution should be given?

Advertising influence people to buy things such as clothes and shoes. What are the problems caused by that? What solution should be given?
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Advertising in today’s world affects consumer purchases of goods
for example
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equipment and clothing.
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to
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promotion is one of the main ways to market goods.
Firstly
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,
in
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advertisements have some basic issues
from
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in
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the human’s
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human’s
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human
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mind.
Such
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as we mainly buy
Coca cola
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and Pepsi among
of
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apply
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different
beverage
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beverages
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, because the
Coca cola
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and
the
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apply
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Pepsi spend
much
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a lot of
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money
for
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on
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ads
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, as if they do not show their products
some
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for some
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weeks, we will
forgot
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about
Coca cola
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Coca-cola
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, else
another fabrics
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another fabric
other fabrics
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too.
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to
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,
in
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sites and social media advertise gambling games and some publicities are not for children, because they add obscene things to some advertisements.
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,
from
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publicities may have software
virus
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viruses
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.
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again, if say in
the
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simple words, even if half of the movie is
ads
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, how angry we will be
.
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, in my opinion, every problem can be resolved, even the issue with advertising.
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, get rid of them. Not to see, not to hear and not to read. Unfortunately, if you are not Mowgli,
then
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you will not be able to completely eliminate promotion from your life. But that can be significantly limited. In addition, the government did
nor
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not
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allow to show
gambling
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of gambling
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games
from
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on
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any social
medias
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media
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or sites. If
in
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on
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tv,
social
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and social
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networks force
to
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you to
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watch publicity, you can complain
from
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to
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them. Else, if we want to non spread software
virus
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viruses
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, we shall improve
security
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the security
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of
internet
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the internet
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. In conclusion, we can not stop
ads
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, as most
of
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humans
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the humans
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, tv and social services
gat
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get
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money from promotion.
Also
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, the
ads
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can help us to get information
some
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about some
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equipment or clothes
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