Advertising influence people to buy things such as clothes and shoes. What are the problems caused by that? What solution should be given?
Advertising in today’s world affects consumer purchases of goods
for example
equipment and clothing. In addition
to
promotion is one of the main ways to market goods.
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Firstly
, in
advertisements have some basic issues Change preposition
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from
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in
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the human’s
human’s
mind. Change noun form
human
Such
as we mainly buy Coca cola
and Pepsi among Add a hyphen
Coca-cola
of
different Change preposition
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beverage
, because the Fix the agreement mistake
beverages
Coca cola
and Add a hyphen
Coca-cola
the
Pepsi spend Correct article usage
apply
much
money Correct quantifier usage
a lot of
for
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on
ads
, as if they do not show their products some
weeks, we will Change preposition
for some
forgot
about Change the verb form
forget
Coca cola
, else Add a hyphen
Coca-cola
another fabrics
too. Replace the adjective
another fabric
other fabrics
Furthermore
to
, Change preposition
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in
sites and social media advertise gambling games and some publicities are not for children, because they add obscene things to some advertisements. Change preposition
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Moreover
, from
publicities may have software Change preposition
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virus
. Fix the agreement mistake
viruses
Then
again, if say in the
simple words, even if half of the movie is Correct article usage
apply
ads
, how angry we will be.
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Secondly
, in my opinion, every problem can be resolved, even the issue with advertising. For instance
, get rid of them. Not to see, not to hear and not to read. Unfortunately, if you are not Mowgli, then
you will not be able to completely eliminate promotion from your life. But that can be significantly limited. In addition, the government did nor
allow to show Correct your spelling
not
gambling
games Change preposition
of gambling
from
any social Change preposition
on
medias
or sites. If Correct your spelling
media
in
tv, Change preposition
on
social
networks force Correct word choice
and social
to
watch publicity, you can complain Correct pronoun usage
you to
from
them. Else, if we want to non spread software Change preposition
to
virus
, we shall improve Fix the agreement mistake
viruses
security
of Add an article
the security
internet
.
In conclusion, we can not stop Add an article
the internet
ads
, as most of
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humans
, tv and social services Add an article
the humans
gat
money from promotion. Correct your spelling
get
Also
, the ads
can help us to get information some
equipment or clothesChange preposition
about some
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