Some people think that keeping pets is good for children while others think it is dangerous and unhealthy. Which opinion do you agree with? Discuss both options and give examples

After I read the statement above regarding whether or not it is good for children to have pets, in my opinion, I agree beyond a shadow of a doubt, that these domesticated animals are

such

reliable companions for young ones and

therefore

, they have a lot to teach them. In the following paragraphs, I will provide the reasons why I go to

this

extent, and

also

some examples that prove my point. First of all, even though either cats or dogs can suffer from different kinds of illnesses,

similarly

all of them can be avoided through a vaccination procedure. As a matter of fact, it is well known that

this

type of animal must be vaccinated since they are born. Veterinarians

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will take care of

this

and will assist pet owners to carry on with

this

process until it finishes.

In addition

, pets could be dangerous sometimes

however

muzzles and leashes can be useful tools to avoid any problems.

Besides

, it is

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responsibility to buy a pet that fit their sons,

for instance

.

On the other hand

, either dogs or cats can become true children’s friends, and

as a result

, kids can build responsible behaviour by taking care of them,

for instance

; feeding them, walking them out and playing with them among others.

Moreover

, it is amazing how quickly young ones can start having feelings for their pets, especially those who do not have any siblings around.

To sum up

, having dogs

while

one is a child, certainly has more advantages than drawbacks not only because of time-sharing and relationship-building around them but

also

because they teach discipline and responsibility to kids who have to take care of them.