you have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neghboorur. Write a letter to your neighbor. In your letter: Introduce yourself Describe your plans for the party Invite your neighbor to come

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Dear Sir or Madam, Hope

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letter finds you in radiant health and the best of spirits. By the way, my name is Joziba Maxmasoliyeva. Whose is your new neighbour

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You know I have just moved into

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home two days ago . First and foremost,

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neighbours in the future . So

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want to say my plans which are related to

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letter.

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to have my party tomorrow.

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invented my close friends and relatives . I want to celebrate it with loud music .

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, may be noisy .

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you . If you need any other details , please feel free to write to me. I would certainly be interested in hearing from you soon. Thank you for your time and consideration. Yours faithfully, Joziba Maxmasoliyeva.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 5.0

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Task Achievement: 6.0

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7 paragraphs

170 words

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Around the world, rural people are moving to cities and urban areas, so populations in the countryside are decreasing. Is this a positive or negative development?