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The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table provides information about how long routes and the
number
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 of
passengers
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 used metros railways systems per year in millions in six different cities with the date opened.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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 the
number
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 of
passengers
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 who took metros in Tokyo was the highest rate, and London was the largest
number
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 of routes,
while
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 Kyoto had the lowest
number
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 both of
kilometres
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 of route and
passengers
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. In terms of
Kilometres
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 of the route, there had the biggest
number
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 of
kilometres
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 in London which is 394
kilometres
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,
whereas
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 there was the smallest route in Kyoto just only 11
kilometres
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.
Similarly
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, Los Angeles saw a double rate by 28
kilometres
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.
According to
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 the
number
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 of
passengers
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, in 1927, Tokyo had the highest total of
passengers
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 in 1928 million which differed from Paris which was the second city which had the most
number
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 of
passengers
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 accounting for 1191 million.
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, the lowest
number
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 of people who took the subway was in Kyoto (45 million people).

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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, passengers, kilometres with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 7 times.
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