The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table provides information about how long routes and the
number
of
passengers
used metros railways systems per year in millions in six different cities with the date opened.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the
number
of
passengers
who took metros in Tokyo was the highest rate, and London was the largest
number
of routes,
while
Kyoto had the lowest
number
both of
kilometres
of route and
passengers
. In terms of
Kilometres
of the route, there had the biggest
number
of
kilometres
in London which is 394
kilometres
,
whereas
there was the smallest route in Kyoto just only 11
kilometres
.
Similarly
, Los Angeles saw a double rate by 28
kilometres
.
According to
the
number
of
passengers
, in 1927, Tokyo had the highest total of
passengers
in 1928 million which differed from Paris which was the second city which had the most
number
of
passengers
accounting for 1191 million.
However
, the lowest
number
of people who took the subway was in Kyoto (45 million people).
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