The table shows the Proportions of Pupils Attending Four Secondary School Types Between Between 2000 and 2009.
The table indicates the percentage of students attending four different types of
schools
between 2000 and 2009. The data tells that community schools
experienced a consistent and considerable increase throughout the years. Conversely
, other schools
have seen a slight increase or decrease.
To begin
with, specialist schools
' proportion in 2000 was 12% and witnessed a steady drop since then
. A similar situation happened to grammar school with a more drastic decline of 24% in the first year and only 12% by 2009. In addition
, the highest fall-off among four different schools
was encountered by voluntary-controlled schools
. From over half to 20%.
On the other hand
, while
the other three academies went through a marginal decrease, the opposite state happened to community schools
. Steady growth was arising for this
school. It can be seen that they start with less than 20% to over 50% in 9 years.Submitted by alifahrc on
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