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Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

#people #advertisements #products #lives
Advertisement was born to make the consumer get near to the new
product
, service or new promotion on the existing
of
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product
 and service easier.
Also
, advertising provides us with additional information and expands our variety of options. Through advertisement, we can know more about the
product
 that we have never heard. There might be some convenient products for busy
peolple
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people
 that most of us don’t know about its existence or
having
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 no time to learn about it.
For example
, there is a
product
 called “food storage container”-
the
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 box for
the
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busy people to carry their lunch or breakfast. But many people don’t know where to buy it so without the advertising,
the
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 might not know about
such
 a convenient
product
. Any business requires advertising since it generates
massive
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 income for the enterprise. Advertising,
however
, frequently exaggerates a
product
's quality, which is annoying for
the
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consumers. Nowadays, it's easy to notice advertisements everywhere. Even when watching TV, advertisements frequently interrupt the show or movie to promote unnecessary things that irritate us. In conclusion, there are benefits and drawbacks to advertisements. It can be utilized as a method to interact with customers and improve consumption.
As a result
, we must use advertising wisely to earn revenue and satisfy consumers.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • encourage
  • persuade
  • manipulative
  • unnecessary
  • excessive
  • artificial needs
  • desires
  • consumers
  • oversaturation
  • impulse buying
  • financial problems
  • inform
  • educate
  • features
  • benefits
  • innovations
  • raise awareness
  • social issues
  • positive behavior
  • enrich
  • well-being
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