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Some educationalists think that international exchange visits will benefit for teenagers at school. To what extent do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

#educationalists #exchange #visits #benefit #teenagers #school
It is argued that most
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the
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school
students
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by
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 international exchange. I completely agree with the idea that volunteering abroad will help them to learn about their society and culture which enhances their knowledge and creativity. There are a number of reasons
that
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why it is significant
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 for
student's
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a student's
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 life.
To begin
 with,
students
 can learn
plethora
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 of things by doing it. One possible reason is that the
students
 can learn
other
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country
's
culture
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cultures
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 and
Language
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. As they have to stay
that
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country
 and have to talk with that
country
's people.
As a result
, they know about both of these which will help them in future to handle international
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. Another reason is that they gain moral qualities
such
 as humanity,
affectionate
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, kindness genuine and so on.
Moreover
, they do the
work
lots
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 of individuals and have to understand
about
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their feelings and emotions which will help them to boost
up
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their insight characteristics.
For example
, my friend hiya joint volunteer organization and she acquired punctuality , kindness dignity, patience etc which did not have before participating there.
In addition
, the
students
 can become
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.
Furthermore
, they travel
under
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 developed countries and know the lack of resources, facilities etc about that
countries'
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.
As a consequence
, they become conscious
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 their native
country
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 resources and other elements.
However
, they will do hard
work
 to establish themselves and
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their nation
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 because they see how third
country
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countries
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 struggle for their basic needs i.e. education, treatment, food and so on.
As a result
, they understand that they get plenty of facilities from their
country
 and they have to use them by doing hard
work
. In conclusion, considering the factors discussed above. I believe
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international exchange will be
blessing
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a blessing
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 for the
students'
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student's
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 mental development and for
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the nationals
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nationals
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wellbeing
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well-being
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • educationalists
  • international exchange visits
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • outweigh
  • benefit
  • teenagers
  • school
  • exposes
  • different cultures
  • perspectives
  • enhances
  • language skills
  • promotes
  • independence
  • self-confidence
  • builds
  • lifelong friendships
  • provides
  • unique learning experiences
  • expensive
  • homesickness
  • emotional distress
  • careful planning
  • logistical arrangements
  • disrupt
  • academic progress
  • safety
  • security risks
  • cultural appropriation
  • misunderstandings
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