The table illustrates the proportion of monthly household income five European countries spend on food and drink, housing, clothing, and entertainment.
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data about the rate of monthly household income some Change the verb form
gives
Europeasn
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European
countries
spend on food drink,housing,clothing and entertainment.There are five European Use synonyms
countries
.They are France,Germany,Use synonyms
UK
,Turkey and Spain.
Looking at the graph as a whole,Correct article usage
the UK
five
European Correct article usage
the five
countries
all the most spend on food and drink Use synonyms
Linking Words
also
housing.As you can see,Correct word choice
and also
five
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the five
countries
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no
big difference Add a missing verb
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due to
Linking Words
proportion
of monthly household income they spend on something.
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the proportion
a proportion
France
,Germany and UK the priority is to spend Change preposition
in France
money
mostly on housing.Use synonyms
On the other hand
,Turkey and Spain prefer to use their Linking Words
money
to buy food and drink.As you can see,a little amount of Use synonyms
money
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is spend
in the same way,by all Change the verb form
is spent
of
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apply
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countries
,between clothing and entertainment and clothes.France uses less Add an article
the countries
money
on them.Use synonyms
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