The table illustrates the proportion of monthly household income five European countries spend on food and drink, housing, clothing, and entertainment.

The table illustrates the proportion of monthly household income five European countries spend on food and drink, housing, clothing, and entertainment.
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give
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data about the rate of monthly household income some
Europeasn
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European
countries
spend on food drink,housing,clothing and entertainment.There are five European
countries
.They are France,Germany,
UK
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the UK
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,Turkey and Spain. Looking at the graph as a whole,
five
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the five
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European
countries
all the most spend on food and drink
also
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and also
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housing.As you can see,
five
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the five
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countries
no
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big difference
due to
proportion
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the proportion
a proportion
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of monthly household income they spend on something. In detail,
France
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in France
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,Germany and UK the priority is to spend
money
mostly on housing.
On the other hand
,Turkey and Spain prefer to use their
money
to buy food and drink.As you can see,a little amount of
money
is spend
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is spent
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in the same way,by all
of
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apply
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countries
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the countries
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,between clothing and entertainment and clothes.France uses less
money
on them.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Proportion
  • Household income
  • Allocate
  • Basic necessities
  • Expenditures
  • Essentials
  • Economy
  • Living conditions
  • Standard of living
  • Cultural significance
  • Leisure activities
  • Financial prioritization
  • Noticeable trends
  • Unusual allocations
  • Society's values
  • Economic status
  • Illustrates
  • Highlights
  • Comparison
  • Analyze
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