The pie chart shows the main reason why agricultural land becomes less productive.
The charts illustrate the information on crucial causes of worldwide agricultural
land
degradation and each country's main reasons in North America, Use synonyms
Europe
and Oceania during the 1990s.
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Overall
, over-grazing accounted for the largest proportion in Linking Words
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chart followed by Linking Words
deforestation
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while
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other
comprised the smallest. Correct pronoun usage
others
Also
, the most degraded region was Linking Words
Europe
. Use synonyms
Europe
's main reason was Use synonyms
deforestation
.
Looking at the first graph, Use synonyms
it is clear that
over-grazing was the most serious reason Linking Words
of
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for
land
corruption at 35%. Use synonyms
However
, the ratio of Linking Words
deforestation
and over-cultivation was roughly the same with Use synonyms
deforestation
at 30% and 28% each. The figure Use synonyms
of
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for
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the other
other
was the smallest and it is 7 times as little as over-grazing.
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others
According to
the second graph, North America had the least Linking Words
land
deterioration among the three areas at 5% Use synonyms
while
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Europe
was the most degraded at 23%. Use synonyms
Also
, the most significant reason was different Linking Words
by
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apply
regions
. North America was affected Fix the agreement mistake
region
from
over-cultivation at 3.3% and Change preposition
by
Europe
's main cause of Use synonyms
land
degradation was Use synonyms
deforestation
at 9.8%. Use synonyms
Finally
, Oceania was mainly affected Linking Words
from
over-grazing at 11.3%Change preposition
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Vocabulary: Replace the words land, europe, deforestation with synonyms.
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