You are a university student living in on-campus accommodation. You are having some problems with the Internet connection in your room. Write to the supervisor of your residence, in your letter: Introduce yourself Inform him/her of the situation Request that the problem be fixed

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am Ranjan bearing student id 95210 from the mechanical engineering 3rd-year batch.

This

is to inform you about the issue with the internet connectivity in the campus accommodation. I stay in room no. 504 at

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hostel no. 2. Internet connectivity is horrible because it is down most of the time.

Moreover

, when it is up the connection speed is too slow. The connection is necessary for completing our assignments.

Additionally

, we pay a yearly amount for internet to use.

Furthermore

this

issue is hampering our timelines for the assignment submission and various other activities.

In addition

, we use the services to check the latest study materials and videos. I request you to please check the issue as soon as possible considering our studies in mind. I hope the problem will be checked on time and let me know if anything else is required. Regards, Ranjan

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

149 words

7.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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You are a university student living in on-campus accommodation. You are having some problems with the Internet connection in your room. Write to the supervisor of your residence, in your letter: Introduce yourself Inform him/her of the situation Request that the problem be fixed

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