Some people believe that reading stories from a book is better than watching TV or playing games for children.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays there are enough numbers of people around the world who think that playing games on the smartphone and watching TV is affected harmfully for every kind and the best choice is to
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by parents.From my perspective ,I agree with
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essay will demonstrate why its proponents are correct. First of all,the power of the book can be compared to the power of the sun,but not everyone notices
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power.The book affected the feelings hidden in the inner world of a person and these feelings push a person towards new goals.
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but it is violently dangerous for their brains,eyes,speech and so on.
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,if parents read books every night,
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can be wise.
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,new views will arise child whose parents always read to him. He has a lot of ideas
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he must choose one of the most essential for himself,in view of the fact that an idea may show the right way for his life.
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,watching TV and playing games can persuade
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to do misconduct
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as crime,shamelessness and so on.
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considering the aforementioned points books have always played an important role in humanity and we should not forget that books-most needed material knowledge and
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IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 250 words in writing task 2. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long essay will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.

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