The map show Southside,a shopping mall, as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarise the indormation by selecting and repoting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two maps show the shopping
mall
, Southside, in its current form and its proposed expansion.
Use synonyms
Overall
, Linking Words
it is clear that
the plan is to extend the Linking Words
centre
and its car Use synonyms
park
into nearby green space to allow for more stores and a greater focus on fashion at the expense of eateries and space for activities,
Currently, Southside Use synonyms
Mall
consists of only a supermarket, department store, cinemas, a noodle shop and cafe with a children's play area and toilet facilities. To the east of the Use synonyms
centre
, there is a golf course that backs onto a Use synonyms
park
, Use synonyms
while
to the south, there is a fitness Linking Words
centre
and a car Use synonyms
park
opposite the Use synonyms
mall
entrance.
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According to
the proposal, only the supermarket, toilet and entrance will remain at the original site. The most significant development will be the extension of the Linking Words
mall
in an easterly direction, where it will overtake land previously occupied by the golf course and Use synonyms
park
. The fitness Use synonyms
centre
too will be demolished to make way for the car Use synonyms
park
which will more than double in size. Inside the Use synonyms
mall
itself, Use synonyms
although
the proposed renovation will allow for more stores, the department store will remain, increasing in size and acquiring its own entrance. A cosmetics and gift shop will be added, Linking Words
as well as
a beauty salon. There will, Linking Words
however
, be nowhere to eat as plans show the cafe will become an information Linking Words
centre
.Use synonyms
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