The map show Southside,a shopping mall, as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarise the indormation by selecting and repoting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two maps show the shopping
mall
, Southside, in its current form and its proposed expansion.
Overall
, it is clear that
the plan is to extend the centre
and its car park
into nearby green space to allow for more stores and a greater focus on fashion at the expense of eateries and space for activities,
Currently, Southside Mall
consists of only a supermarket, department store, cinemas, a noodle shop and cafe with a children's play area and toilet facilities. To the east of the centre
, there is a golf course that backs onto a park
, while
to the south, there is a fitness centre
and a car park
opposite the mall
entrance.
According to
the proposal, only the supermarket, toilet and entrance will remain at the original site. The most significant development will be the extension of the mall
in an easterly direction, where it will overtake land previously occupied by the golf course and park
. The fitness centre
too will be demolished to make way for the car park
which will more than double in size. Inside the mall
itself, although
the proposed renovation will allow for more stores, the department store will remain, increasing in size and acquiring its own entrance. A cosmetics and gift shop will be added, as well as
a beauty salon. There will, however
, be nowhere to eat as plans show the cafe will become an information centre
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