The diagram below shows how leather goods are produced. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting main features.

The diagram below shows how leather goods are produced. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting main features.
The process chart reveals information about the production stages of
leather
goods.
Overall
, the process is quite simple and has numerous stages, starting from the drying of animal
skin
and ending with the manufacturing of different
leather
products.
To begin
with, animal
skin
is dried under the heat of the sun. After that, it is transported to the
factory
by truck for processing
further
.
Then
after, a mixture of water and lime was used to wash it.
Further
, it is soaked by a chemical, called lime, followed by flattening in the roller to flatten dried
skin
.
Furthermore
, a process dried
skin
is soaked by Tannin, which is a mixture of water and vegetable matter.
Moreover
, it is polished by machine before being transported to a
factory
. After reaching a
factory
, it is processed by machinery to produce different types of
leather
goods. A
factory
produced shoes, wallets, and ladies' foot ware from
leather
material.
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