The chart below shows what Antropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The given pie chart illustrates anthropology students' destinations after finishing undergraduate degree courses
from
one university. There are different paths for Change preposition
at
alumnies
Correct your spelling
alumnus
such
as working full-time, part-time, working full-time or part-time with postgraduation study at the same time or even not working at all.
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Overall
, nearly half of the students Linking Words
going
to work at Wrong verb form
go
full-time
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a full-time
job
. Only 5% of graduates continue Fix the agreement mistake
jobs
to
Change preposition
apply
studying
and working Wrong verb form
study
at
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apply
part-time
Add an article
a part-time
job
at the same time.
First and foremost, there are different Fix the agreement mistake
jobs
range
of Fix the agreement mistake
ranges
employement
opportunities Correct your spelling
employment
such
as freelance consultants, private companies or Linking Words
government
sector. Half of these Correct article usage
the government
fields
employees' annual incomes are more than $75.000. Change the noun form
field
Moreover
, 50% of people, who are working after 5 years Linking Words
for
Change preposition
in
government
sector, earn more than $100.000 a year. Private companies are paying relatively lower than other fields. Add an article
the government
In contrast
, freelance consultants and government sector employees are earning quite similar amounts Linking Words
according to
the table. It is true that %8 of graduates' financial and educational situations are unknown, and half of the graduates Linking Words
working
at full-time jobs.Wrong verb form
work
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