The chart below shows what Antropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The chart below shows what Antropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
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The given pie chart illustrates anthropology students' destinations after finishing undergraduate degree courses
from
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one university. There are different paths for
alumnies
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alumnus
such
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as working full-time, part-time, working full-time or part-time with postgraduation study at the same time or even not working at all.
Overall
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, nearly half of the students
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to work at
full-time
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job
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. Only 5% of graduates continue
to
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apply
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studying
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and working
at
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part-time
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a part-time
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job
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jobs
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at the same time. First and foremost, there are different
range
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of
employement
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employment
opportunities
such
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as freelance consultants, private companies or
government
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the government
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sector. Half of these
fields
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employees' annual incomes are more than $75.000.
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, 50% of people, who are working after 5 years
for
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government
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the government
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sector, earn more than $100.000 a year. Private companies are paying relatively lower than other fields.
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, freelance consultants and government sector employees are earning quite similar amounts
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the table. It is true that %8 of graduates' financial and educational situations are unknown, and half of the graduates
working
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at full-time jobs.
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