The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart illustrates how many of the enquiries were received in one city over
six-month
period by Tourist Information Office in 2011. Add an article
a six-month
Overall
, the enquiries that were received in person and by telephone climbed significantly over the given period Linking Words
while
those that were got by email showed an opposite trend.
In January, In person access was the least among other channels, Linking Words
however
, its trend went up significantly and Linking Words
coverged
with the Telephone at around 800 in March and keep climbed moderately until June. Correct your spelling
converged
covered
On the other hand
, access by telephone was the most among other channels at the beginning but its trend remained stable until April and increased substantially until June 2011. In contradict, Linking Words
although
receiving enquiries by email was the 2nd highest among other channels and its movement stayed constant at 600 from January to April but Linking Words
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decreased sharply Correct pronoun usage
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