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Students are now facing a big problem that they have no time for outside activities such as sports or camping. Their time mostly is used for studying, chatting or sleeping. What is the consequence of this and what is your suggestion to solve this problem? You should write at least 200 words to express your opinion.

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is generally agree
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 today that learners in high schools do not have much
time
 for outdoor exercises and
picnic
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. The reason for
this
 issue
that
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student
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students
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 spend almost their
time
for
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learning, chatting or going to bed. In
this
 essay, we will discuss the fallout and give my opinion. One result is that they will be overweight or worse is stress
then
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 depression. Because of the risk, students need to balance between study and entertainment which will help them have more spare
time
 for playing sports
as well as
 outside activities. Another consequence is that
this
 may lead to
lack
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 of soft skills in students.
For instance
, they feel shy when talking to other people.
Therefore
, learners should not text
instead
 they ought to communicate face-to-face.
Moreover
, minors should
enroll
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 in more social activities in order to improve their life skill. In conclusion, because of these above things we strongly believe that students
are now do
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 not have
time
 for other activities than they were in the past.
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