The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparision where relevant

The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparision where relevant
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The diagrammatic illustration given depicts the
road
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access to the city hospital in 2007 and in 2010 after the renovations were made. By collecting all the relevant evidence of the key features, contracts are made.
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, it is shown that the map of the city hospital has seen major changes in the year 2010 compared to 2007. A few new roads , a bus station, a staff
car
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park
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, two new roundabouts and a public
car
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park
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have been introduced. But the Hosptial area and ring
road
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around it remained the same.
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the analyses, it is observed that there is a roundabout on the south side of the map, which connects to the hospital
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and city
road
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. Adjacent to the roadway we can see a newly launched bus station and on the opposite of it there is a newly made parking area for staff members whose entry is from the second roundabout on the right side, prior to the map in 2007 there was just simple
car
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park
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along the pavement. When we move toward the east and make a slight turn towards the left side, a
car
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park
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is visible from there. All-inclusive there were quite a few vital changes made in the structure of the new hospital in 2010.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words road, car, park with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • infrastructure, development, expansion, accessibility, comparative analysis, layout, direction, emergency services, facilities, pedestrian paths, urban development, strategic planning
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