Many people argue that in order to improve educational quality, high school students are encouraged to make comments or even criticism on their teachers. Other think it will lead to loss of respect and discipline in the classroom. Discuss both views and give your Opinion.

While

some folks argue that

children

are inspired to give

comments

and criticism

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teachers

to increase

quality

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towards education, other believe that it

decrease

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their

respect

and discipline in the

class

. In my opinion, I consider that

students

can

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their

respect

and discipline towards

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the teacher

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teacher

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teachers

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, if they are commenting and criticizing

to

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their

teachers

. On the one hand, some people think that to increase educational performance

students

are uplifted to make

comments

and criticism

on

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their

students

. To commence with,

students

who are new in the school and want to learn something new

then

they are

started

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to comment and

to

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criticise the

teacher

.

For example

, in computer programming

class

students

make

comments

to their

teacher

about learning new ideas after the

class

. Another reason is that

teacher

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can not correct the

students

what

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for what

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they do wrong.

As a result

,

children

are starting criticising

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their

teacher

to learn

their

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mistakes.

On the other hand

, it is often believed that making

comments

and criticism can lead to

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losing

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their esteem and discipline and I agree.

First

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reason is that

children

, who are behaving badly towards

teachers

, are hated by everyone

from

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the school.

Therefore

, those

children

stay alone in

classroom

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the classroom

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and

this

lead to them to think bad things.

For instance

,

children

who are staying alone in the

class

always

commenting

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on other

students

,especially girls and

teachers

.

Furthermore

, those

students

are making

a lots

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of mistakes in their assignments and exams.

Due to

this

,

students

are irritated by

teacher's

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words and say some bad

comments

to them.

As a result

, they lose their

respect

. In conclusion,

while

people may vary in their opinion between making

comments

and losing

respect

, I think that

children

do not

commenting

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and

criticizing

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criticise

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to

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their

teachers

because these behaviours lead

to

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them

in

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wrong

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path in the future.