Some people think that watching sports in one’s free time is just a waste of time. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Sports

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Sport

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is

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a wide source of entertainment. For some people, it becomes an obsession to watch

sports

.

However

, many believe that it is not healthy and one should indulge in more productive

activity

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. I disagree with

this

ideology. A

person

should be able to make use of his free

time

according to

a leisure activity that pleases him. To commence with, many

persons

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people

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believe that showing support to their

team

shows patriotism for their country.

For example

, many

individuals

watch cricket in their free

time

and cheer for their country's

team

. It increases

player's

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the player's

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enthusiasm and has a positive impact on the whole

team

. 

Moreover

, watching

sports

sometimes, change into a

habbit

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habit

and encourage

individuals

to play. It improves their lifestyle and allows them to become more active.

For example

, many children watch football and enjoy playing the

game

with their own teams. Some

individuals

even opt

a

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game

as their career. It has a positive influence on an individual's mind.

However

many believe that it is a waste of

time

. Disputers argue that

individuals

spend hours, watching a sport that does not benefit them in life. They think that people should be more involved in

a

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physical

actvity

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activity

rather than watching television.

For example

, a cricket

game

lasts for 4-5 hours and a

person

spends all his

time

watching that

game

,

instead

of involving in a more useful activity. Yet, it has many advantages over disadvantages. I believe it is a healthy way of entertainment. It not only gives a sense of satisfaction to a

person

,

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but

also

motivates him to play and reduces the stress in his life.

Furthermore

,

individuals

who work 5 days a week, enjoy watching

sports

with their friends and family at the weekend. It increases their social interactions and helps in relaxing them mentally and physically.

To conclude

, watching one's favourite

team

play, not only encourages a

person

,

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but

also

favours the

team

. Its benefits outweigh its drawbacks. It is a basic way of

entertaning

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entertaining

ones' self and should be appreciated.