Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

These days, there is a controversy about which one is a better ability for

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, competition or

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. Some

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think it is more beneficial for

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to learn how to compete.

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,

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believe that

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with a

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co-operation

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will become more helpful adults, which is the same opinion as me. On the one hand, the former

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's claim is based on the working environment of the real world.

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should compete with

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during their whole lives.

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, companies provide the opportunity for workers who make better results to progress or earn more salaries. It means that employees need to complete some tasks more successfully than

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.

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, a

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of competition is the best motivator for

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to succeed.

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reason, those

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think

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need to practice how to compete with

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before being adults.

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, these days,

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skills are more useful in the real field.

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is because many businesses require their employees to do

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projects.

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, workers in a marketing company form a team and make one result by sharing ideas.

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, most

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who only have a

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of competition usually do not consider

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, leading to selfish

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. They will strongly claim their opinion, not accept

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, provoking conflicts. Studies have shown that a

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composed of

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who did not know how to work with colleagues made worse results than other groups.

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co-operation

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is a more essential

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for

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to adapt

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the real world after they grow up. All things considered, there is

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reason why

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should acquire each ability.

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, it is true that the latter

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's opinion has more

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, I firmly believe the reasons for learning about the methods of

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is more imperative for

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than the opposite view.